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smiles always last

Smiles only
but not like mine

This smile took many hearts away
only in one now it stays today
each and every night all say
but many a times
he looks another way
to compare your smile
with someone elses all say

but there lies no truth in that
your smile is aging maybe
but still spills youth
on many daily

your smile can be compared
with by mine only
come smile at me
will ye surely
a poets smile lasts a lifetime
yours will also
along with mine
maybe longer if wishes divine!
with me then
twill still be fine...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Rula

Rula

9 years 2 months ago

Smiles

Never age Lovedly. How true!
Thank you for sharing.

Rula

Rula

9 years 2 months ago

Smiles

Never age Lovedly. How true!
Thank you for sharing.

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

kindness Rula

your appreciation is like a tonne of honey
churned out of an ocean of buzzing bees

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

9 years 2 months ago

A smile

is always a good thing. As an old song said,
Though you may wear the best,
You're never fully dressed
without a smile.

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

the best dressed

is fully undressed
but has only a smile

did you not see
THE TITANIC
she still smiles
at me !

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

ha ha great

you will be surprised
when you see me
only with my tv on
hahaha
friend
you make me smile
nice poet u