Smiling face returned

Now I recall
the young gal smiling away to glory...
did you run away
to make another...
Love story

Glad you return
and
have penned your words...
else I'd have remained in oblivion still

I have always been unheard
less seen
but memory has never
failed me ever
in between....

where ever one may go
Loved does follow
and
this all know
you too!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

mand

11 years 8 months ago

This is a really joyful poem!

This is a really joyful poem! I can almost feel you bouncing up and down with happiness. And I share your joy!

I think this is a lovely tribute to one with a smiling face!!

Love Mand xxxx

loved

11 years 8 months ago

thanks Mand

In my message box
after two years was her message
so I instantly replied

two humours
I have posted on urs
go see and laff will ye

instant poet is LOVEDLY
now also known as
MAESTRO
across the Globe..

Seren

11 years 8 months ago

You have never been unheard that I know of, just we don't always comment when the poem reads more like a diary, I think I have said that before haven't I lol thanks for reading my poem it was appreciated :)

love JC xxx

loved

11 years 8 months ago

I love to joke

and I must say
missed you from the day you eloped
from Neopoet
for a better environment...
glad you return to bless many
and me like any!