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Jun 12, 2018
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Smoke signals & Shadows dance
shadow is to light
what smoke is to fire
by the same token
a poem should leave
a trail of imprints on the sand
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
gregwa8
7 years 1 month ago
cause and effect. i like this
cause and effect. i like this short poem. it inspires me to write, knowing my words will create light and fire, shadows and smoke, if i focus on my craft.
raj
7 years 1 month ago
Thanks Greg for reading and
Thanks Greg for reading and connecting spot on with the underlying message. Wishing you the best of inspiration to write..
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