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Snafoo (Sensitive New Age Fakes on Overdrive)

one metrosexual
and one real snag
standing on the corner
huffin’ on a fag
one says bitch
and the other says ho
blown is the cover
of the snag metro

About This Poem

Last Few Words: some folks might not like it . . . (heh)

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New Zealand, NZL

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen, Morrissey, Jonny Cash

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emogothgirl

emogothgirl

10 years 5 months ago

well

I can't tell if this is kind of insulting or funny. what is a snag?

Simon Smythe

Simon Smythe

10 years 5 months ago

snag

sensitive new age guy

I only mean to insult those guys who spout feminist doctrine in the hope of scoring with the ladies

emogothgirl

emogothgirl

10 years 5 months ago

aha!

thanks for clarifying. yeah i hate those guys, they give feminism a bad connotation. in that case, nice write :P

mag

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

10 years 5 months ago

I like this,

I like this it's punchy, fresh, and very effective. Keep them coming, Regards Roscoe...

weirdelf

weirdelf

8 years 6 months ago

When called a snag

and ascertaining its meaning I explained
"No, I'm a Caring Understanding Nineties Type"
Still am.
Snagism never really worked with the ladies, it only attracted closet faghags.