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lovedly
lovedly
Jan 03, 2022 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SNOWY WHITE NIGHT

The night is dark
no sun
nor moon
Galaxy asleep
but you
must have seen snow
shining like my teeth
normally I don't grin
NO TEETH

LOL LOL
COME AND SEE
Through veiled clouds
will ye

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

3 years 6 months ago

Hmmmm...

an open invitation from lovedly? I'm sure that some buxom lady of the night will take him up on that! LoL Nice change from your usual fare of death. Your little joke about the teeth rings true with most of us old timers! ~ Geez.
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scribbler

3 years 6 months ago

Hi loved

Yep when clouds are thick the night becomes as dark as the inside of a black cow lol. Your teeth are likely still white as they sit on your bedside table.............

Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 6 months ago

A show of humor here

I smell a scintillating wit in the poem. Lovedly knows how to bring humour in the scene. I love the aptness of the poem.