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May 08, 2020
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Social Distancing
So surreal.
I watch the
Red-Winged Blackbird
skip from one blade
of ornamental grass
to another,
the red in its feathers
bursting from beneath the black,
its conk-la-reee call
claiming its space -
a signal for everything to keep a distance.
I adjust my mask
as I watch it fly to a tree.
So surreal.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
5 years 2 months ago
Hi, Teddy
Appreciate your comments! Will be glad when we have all this behind us, safely.
Thank you!
Lavender
Geezer
5 years 2 months ago
Mother Nature...
has her own social distancing. A nice look out the window as we contemplate her ways ~ Geezer.
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Lavender
5 years 2 months ago
Hi, Geezer
Lots to think about during these unusual times.
Thank you for reading!
L
Lavender
5 years 2 months ago
Hi, Jerry
I enjoy the Red-Winged Blackbird a lot, not only for its beauty, but also for its musical call. Your rehab work in Arizona sounds awesome, truly sounds like rewarding years!
Thank you for your wonderful comments!
L