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lovedly
lovedly
Feb 06, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Some Other Time

Some other time
my eyes are freshly wet
do await some more time

I now no more can mime
it's late in the night
need more time

sleep over powers me
let the dawn rise
and overnight
I will become
may be wise

may be not
if comes early my demise
then my soul shall rise

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 5 months ago

Yes

It’s like the childhood bedtime prayer except all dressed up in Lovedly fabric.

I like it,
Tim

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 5 months ago

Very kind of you RA

As you traverse my way
I sleep nude
as and when
childhood spent
now no lament

loved's
amen
lovedly
has no repent

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 5 months ago

Lovedly, lovedly...

make sure you at least cover yourself before inviting us to come visit you in the night! LoL
~ Geez.
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Seren

Seren

2 years 5 months ago

Loved

This holds the sadness of being

Love Sis xox