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Jul 08, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Some Summer Haiku

Mid day heat shimmers
Over a close cut hay field
In heart of summer

Beneath a large oak
Biting breaths of soggy air
July in the south

Dew spangled dawn
Disappears after sunrise
Becomes humid air

Bird pants on deck rail
In the late afternoon heat
craving cooler days

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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S

scribbler

14 years ago

Hi anna

just a couple of quickies I threw together last night. thanks for visiting..........stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hi Barb

Thank you I'm glad you dropped by.........stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hi loved

thanks for visiting. Been so busy I've had little time to comment on friends' poems lately, but I Have been reading them. Reckon I've too many irons in the fire.......................stan

loved

loved

14 years ago

must share

hot irons with frnds
i liked ur whisky comment on my reactions
and letter written on Ians behest
thanx

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hi

Not exactly my forte either but I like to give them a run every once in a while...............stan

S

scribbler

14 years ago

hi Leonard

Thanks for dropping by and kind comment................stan