Somehow

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet’s AI:

This poem effectively conveys a tender connection between the speaker and their grandmother through the shared experience of poetry. The imagery of "writing dancing in the margins" is vivid and evocative, suggesting liveliness and presence in the grandmother’s handwriting. The phrase "gorgeous, spìdery cursive" adds a tactile and visual detail that enriches the poem’s intimacy.

To enhance the poem’s impact, consider tightening the rhythm and punctuation for smoother flow. For example, the line "She commented on verses in her gorgeous, spìdery cursive." might be more fluid without the period, linking it more closely to the next line. Additionally, the poem could benefit from exploring the emotional resonance of this shared appreciation more deeply—perhaps by illustrating a specific memory or a particular favorite verse that connects them.

Overall, the poem’s strength lies in its personal and heartfelt tone, but expanding on the sensory and emotional details could deepen the reader’s engagement.

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detracts from this piece. I would make sure that the lines are made pretty much even with each other. It makes it seem more like a poem than just a written statement. 
While I do not see the obvious [person]ifcation, I do see the attempt by giving so much description to it and the writing of your Grandmother. I say look up the word personification and add a little bit to this. I think that it will be worth it. BTW, I really appreciated the description of G-ma's handwriting. Mine had the same delightful, spidery handwriting. ~Geezer.

Lovely poem Mary. I agree with Geez about restructuring the lines for meter. However, being a fan of brevity in regard to poetry, I would leave it as is, as it doesn't need more to describe the experience for the reader. The description of your grandmother's writing is sublime. Thank you for sharing this!

Hello, Mary,

What could make a book of poetry even more delightful?  Endearing penmanship and words from Grandmother.  Such a touching title, too.

Lovely poetry!

L