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lovedly
lovedly
May 01, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

sometimes I feel

This world has more
than many trees
mostly are visited by bees

few like you and me
love the forest breeze
so come and reach out to me also
if you please.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

alidzain

alidzain

9 years 2 months ago

yap

I used to feel like that too.

Alid

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

hi

we all are also tall
NEOPOET
poetrees
well done for acceptance

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 2 months ago

Loved

There you are, in the same sphere as us, so take time to look with think at those that are there with you.
In that vast space you will be able to touch eternity, yet your friends will still be close,
Yours as always Ian..

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 2 months ago

Loved

You should have gone to spec savers LOL
Jess is spot on..
Yours Ian..

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

well Ian

One step at a time

One step more we climb
a step missed
we may fall and go blind
but never mind
to try to learn
do well is wont of mankind
some are blessed with kindness
some end up with physical blindness,
yet learn what lies
beyond the beyond
of knowledge attainment
we all should be fond....

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 2 months ago

thanks a lot

Jess
my eyes cataract
softens vision
corrected since

weirdelf

weirdelf

8 years ago

If I seem a pedant and an utter bastard at times

It's because I am.
I give you a harder time than most because you are capable of so much if you would just, dare I say, practice more quality rather than quantity.

I gave you a very nasty time recently over a certain workshop because people there were trying their best to grapple with difficult concepts and you seemed to come in just seeking attention, distracting and wasting their time. I can't honestly apologise for being mean to you but I can honestly welcome you to any workshop if you will just please, please read and follow the process and SPEAK IN PLAIN ENGLISH FOR FUCKS SAKE. ok?
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