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raj

Feb 17, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sound of a Poem

Sound of a poem
is that tiny drop of thought
creating ripples

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

9 years 4 months ago

nice haikooooooooooo

coming raj from youuuuuuuuuuuu

R

9 years 4 months ago

Thanks Lovedly for your time,

Thanks Lovedly for your time, read and comment,

Regards,

9 years 4 months ago

Raj

Well done.

Alid.

R

9 years 4 months ago

Thanks Alid for your time,

Thanks Alid for your time, read and comment.

Regards,

9 years 4 months ago

Not sure...

if it is Haiku, but sure did like it! Short, sweet and succinct! ~ Gee

R

9 years 4 months ago

Hi Gee

Appreciate your time, read and comment. Good to know you liked it. You are right, it's not a Haiku but follows the 5-7-5 syllable sequence...

9 years 4 months ago

OH !!! My big smile.

Applause Raj .. Brava ...

One of your absolute best my friend I am so glad i found it

Love and biggest hugs Jayne xxx

R

9 years 4 months ago

Thanks Jayne for taking time

Thanks Jayne for taking time to read this....nice to know you liked it...

much love n hugs...

9 years 4 months ago

love this dear raj

"Sound of poem" I thought this so poetic. It also personalizes poetry when you give it a thought.
I wished the third line would read more as separated from the two other lines. Try "ripples created " and see if you like it more.
I have already enjoyed :)

R

9 years 4 months ago

Thanks Rula for the read,

Thanks Rula for the read, your encouraging comment and suggestion...I will think about it...

Regards,

9 years 3 months ago

Simply said but much said

Simply said but much said

R

9 years 3 months ago

Thanks Shy for stopping by

Thanks Shy for stopping by and your comment..

Regards,

9 years 3 months ago

No problem I don't have a lot

No problem I don't have a lot of time but I try and be a part of things

9 years 3 months ago

I came back to ask

a drop is just a drop
how is it small
or tiny?
I wonder
can you inject some wisdom in me
how soever
dropish tiny

Is a drop in the ocean
bigger than dew
how I wish I also knew
raj ur sublime_ocean

R

9 years 3 months ago

Hi Lovedly

Here I have used "tiny drop" in the context of a thought...not sure if you find it right..

Regards,

9 years 3 months ago

i just like your poetry

was only confirming
if twas a metaphor
tiny thought
great

9 years 3 months ago

Perc!

great poem in so few chosen words

thank U!

(I watch the coffee fill my cup..poetry for this poet!)

R

9 years 3 months ago

Thank you Esker for your time

Thank you Esker for your time, read and appreciative comment.

Regards,

9 years 3 months ago

great senryu raj

Love it
love judy
xxx

R

9 years 3 months ago

Hi Judyanne

Thanks for your time and read. Good to know you liked it.

Regards,

S

9 years 3 months ago

Hi

These Japanese forms are great ways to capture snippets in a few lines aren't they? Good job......stan

R

9 years 3 months ago

Thanks Stan

Yes, I feel challenged to express a thought in short verses. Good to read your appreciative comment.

Regards,