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Feb 21, 2011
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The Sound of Sadness
Sadness has a sound, friend.
I have heard it
sobbing, weeping in the throat of the widow
and the children.
All wrapped up in quilts;
quilts of happy colors;
as if that will change anything.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 5 months ago
Maverick
I have looked at this one from a while back, I think that it needs a little re read for others to assess its value, I found it secretively good.
If there is anything that needs attention then I look forward to any edit that is suggested. Yours Ian.T