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Feb 24, 2023
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Soup.
Eminent professors ev-ery-where,
even those bound to the chair,
all agree whid liddle ol' me-
we'll all be fucked even-tu-ally,
We're gonna die - we're gonna fry
pucker up n kiss yer arse g'bye.
it's difficult to comprehend
jus' when this shit is gonna end,
In a ball o' fire we're in the mire-
JEYZUS MAN,, we'll all expire !!
it may be quick o'er in flick;
clock is ticking tick tock tick,
Or it maybe slow the way ya go
- jus' 'nuf time fer one more blow,
either ways it's fair to say
we're gonna end up - - consommé.
Obi
About This Poem
Last Few Words: With brown bread.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
2 years 4 months ago
Obi
We are screwed one day, I think I want it slow. not quick. I want to be able to sit back with a bourbon and embrace whatever end comes my way.
This is a cracker!! I can't see one thing I would change.
Bravo! & to a slow end, cheers!
Kind Regards Jayne
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
So, Jayne, let me get this
So, Jayne, let me get this straight,,,,
One day in the future, you'd like an alcohol
induced embrace followed by a slow screw
with a big end coming your way ?
Hee hee, God bless you !!!
I've been at the bourbon again,,, love, Obi.
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
Life ain't worth livin were
Life ain't worth livin were it for not fer the bourbon Mark.
Cheers m'dears,,, Obi.
Indivisible_Origin
2 years 4 months ago
pardon my french
But this is fucking amazeballs. Nicely done.
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
Thank you Sir,
Thank you Sir,
its muchly appreciated,,,, Obi.
Lavender
2 years 4 months ago
Soup
Obi,
it's been well said,
"Best of Luck, and Amen!"
Now pass the brown bread!
L
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
LOL,,,,
LOL,,,,
Curt and to the point, L.
Cheers, Obi.
Triskelion
2 years 4 months ago
Hey Obi! YOU FIRST!
Obi Soup
the diner is serving a new soup du jour
it's broth is the froth from a gentleman's sewer
sautéed with his guts
au flambé on his butt
and his nuts that come grilled on a skewer!
Sorry, can't help myself. Keep that rhythm n rhyme going!
Thomas
Obadiah Grey
2 years 4 months ago
Oh, You know me so well !!!!
Oh, You know me so well !!!!
Thank you, Thomas.
For that liddle beaut,
reaally gave me a belly laugh !
Cheers, Obi.
Ruby Lord
2 years 3 months ago
Soup
What I really liked - You're offensive and arse kicking tone and profane words hammered that message home, excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.
You're definitely one to watch out for :) Ruby x
Leslie
8 months ago
Soup!
I couldn't agree more. Were all screwed and the quicker the better. I've always been engaged by your poetry!
Leslie
8 months ago
For Obi, one of my dreams (A bad one)
Woke up one bright morning
with a vision in my head
A catastrophic warning
all my friends were dead
No one seemed to notice
but the sky had turned to red
An atomic age was dawning
the governors all had fled
The people who remained
all were filled with dread
The howling and the wailing
was more than I could bare
The people in the city streets
we're all filled with despair
Their homes had been demolished
it seemed that no one cared
Blood ran in the gutters
we stopped and bowed our heads
The loud and ceaseless mourning
stung our tender ears
The future was unveiling
our eyes were filled with tears
The enemy was upon us
approached with taunting jeers
We faltered in our footsteps
embraced our sudden doom,
but on the bright horizon
A light displaced the gloom
Candlewitch
8 months ago
Dear Obi,
I will be humming this tune to the end... nice...!
hugs, Cat x
mark
8 months ago
Yep!
We all gonna die so might as well enjoy the ride.
[takes brown bread with no raisins]
Mark