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lovedly
lovedly
Aug 26, 2019 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Spend Well

To spend

in love's language

is to spend ''it'' wisely

for lovely kids

the night watches silently

you are breathless

so is she

spend the night

not with me

but her beholding

spend well
your hidden energy

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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S

scribbler

5 years 10 months ago

Hi loved

Any particular reason you capitalizes line 4?. Also you might consider changing "lovers'" to love's......don't know why, just seems better lol...........stan

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 10 months ago

gracious Stan

at times it looks nice
to know
has been read
by poetry papa's
lol ha ha

Sparrow

Sparrow

5 years 10 months ago

Loved

Well one of your better presentations, not sure if the word Progeny is suitable for a night of well spending..
The word could be used as an outcome of such actions , But loved the piece anyway, Yours Ian ..

Eumolpus

Eumolpus

5 years 10 months ago

an interesting take

telling your progeny to go with his beloved and make whoopee, rather than spend the night with you.
Why would he not do so. He could have dinner with you, and her for a long desert afterwards, no?
I don't see the conflict, but I like your libertine attitude.

lovedly

lovedly

5 years 10 months ago

I feel the pleasures

Eumol as and when you visit me

but while u were reading
I was directed to abandon
PROGENY
which I did as asked by IAN