Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Nov 29, 2015
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
spiritual rv in heaven
When you go earlier,
or follow
take some snacks
biscuits and coffee
you know I like it
God’s stalls may not open
for a very long time
and
Bards you and me
will be left out of line
But yes,
let’s earmark a RV
you know what is? ‘tis!
where will it be near about
a lonesome
invisible Apple tree
may be...
A new Adam and Eve
may still be playing,
Ah LOL....
like we once did
having now
a sweeter and more jovial
Humorous
Bright, blushing, nectar loving like kid
now your bid.....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
9 years 7 months ago
Loved
I cant spell that French word either lol, We will meet one day even if our thoughts are the only travellers in the ether they will touch and I will know the young Bard is there, never fear the unknown, because what you don't know can never hurt..
Yours as always, Ian..
lovedly
9 years 7 months ago
great
what a lol occasion
'twill be
u and I rolling
not knowing
who is he!