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Mar 20, 2021
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Spring
Spring Spring,
Is a beautiful thing,
Where flowers grow,
And the birds sing.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: This is the first poem I wrote at 6 years old and my teacher said I would grow up to be an Eccentric writer, thus the Eccentric Poet was born!
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
The Eccentric poet
4 years 4 months ago
Hi Mark
Awww tyvm lovely.
The Eccentric poet
4 years 4 months ago
Hi Teddy
Awww thankyou so much xxxxx
Geezer
4 years 4 months ago
Your teacher...
was right! Eccentricity is purely a matter of opinion, but if you ask me, all poets have the trait; else we would not share our thoughts with the world. I'm glad that your teacher's words had that effect on you; to help you so many years later, share this first poem with us. ~ Geez
The Eccentric poet
4 years 4 months ago
Thankyou
Hiya I got the bug at 6 and just couldn't stop, fell in love with writing xx
Lavender
4 years 4 months ago
Spring
Hello!
How wise you were at 6 years old! One could add many words but your 6-year-old self nailed it with the most honest, descriptive, and poetic language. Darling poem!
Thank you!
Lavender
The Eccentric poet
4 years 3 months ago
Thankyou
Thankyou so much xxx