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Rula
Rula
Mar 24, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

Bring in the Spring Eternal Renga

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Spring (Tanka)

a gypsy spirit 
speaking Bohemian language 
are the wild daisies 

When the season is over 
the phase is caged in a vase

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Rula

Beautiful thanks for jumping in and bringing in the spring with us at eternal renga. Will you please go to your edit and put this in the "bring in the spring workshop". I'll have you in the participants box momentarily

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

Thank you raj

For the encouraging words. Highly appreciate it.

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

Thank you Barbara

for adding me and the nice comment.
Much appreciate it dear.
Hope all is well with you.

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

I'm better

My MS in remission
This broken tooth has me miserable
Don't know if i will ever get it fixed
Don't have the money
Do thus I suffer until it move on
For another day

lovedly

lovedly

9 years 3 months ago

wonderful

coming Rula from you
kindly read mine too
not much a do to

not only all about spring to say
but Rula twill be nice coming my way

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

hello loved

And many thanks for the time and the nice words

alidzain

alidzain

9 years 3 months ago

Salam, Rula

Yes! I've been waiting for you to join the workshop, sis. Can't remember the last time you have written a tanka here.

Alid

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

Thank you

Khalid. I think this is my first or second one.

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Hi

Have you written haiku or senyru lately

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

hello Barbara

are we supposed to write haiku and senyru or only tanka

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Rula

Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.

Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

9 years 3 months ago

Rula

Thanks for joining. In this renga it doesn't matter senyru and haiku = tanka welcome.

Rula

Rula

9 years 3 months ago

thank you

Steve. So kind of you to give this one a visit.
Appreciate it