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springing global warming

This is spring

beautifully musical...
spring is at the doorstep here
but tis still minus six...
perhaps a day more
winter may like to stay

if spring comes
can summer be far away...

then all of us will say
Global Warming by the way and

the scorching heat will burn our skin
soft cream we all shall apply ...
the ointments price will rise sky high---
then we shall say blast the economy

come rain and take the heat away
some one will say
let winter stay...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

wesley snow

12 years 3 months ago

I don't know if you intended it or not, but...

... I couldn't help but read "blast the economy" as a mind rhyme and pronounce the "y" as an "i".
This is classic Loved. Sweet and tender with an edge.

loved

12 years 3 months ago

so grateful to you Snow ...a very long time no sea

thanks for passing bye
do come again

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Loved

The economy is blasted here by the persistent East wind this global warming only make England (UK) much colder in the Winters and wet in the Summers I do hope the in between stretches for months.
EXCELLENT write there and a better "Loved" Poem,
Yours as always Ian.T

loved

12 years 3 months ago

Thanks Ian

for your good
some times you should also say excellent
will raise ones morale

of course your STANDARDS
are SKY HIGH
I know...

Nordic cloud

12 years 3 months ago

Oh I did enjoy this poem, I

Oh I did enjoy this poem, I felt the heat, the cold, and the sentiments,
we wish ourselves here and then there, we are never content,
and yet the changing seasons gives us pleasures, pains,
as does the wintery whiteness and the rains.

Like life both all and some are welcome, welcome, welcome
without them we would surely wither, quite succumb.

Well penned this one, Yours Ann in the perfect climate of today,
hot hot sun, cool reflected from the snow, no wind, wonderful.

My aunt, who left England for Australia, missed the seasons, there,
and the sight of the changing dress of the trees, they rarely change
in that country. I am always thankful for the rain, without that we would
disappear.

loved

12 years 3 months ago

What a beautiful thought from you ma'am.Ann,

you are ever so kind and thanks sister
for sharing all your personal feelings
kindly wish your aunt well for me too .
Regards ma'am..

'''It filled me with joy
that you did this enjoy..

Seren

12 years 3 months ago

Loved

as you look to the Spring I am looking forward to Autumn and Winter we had a hellishly hot summer this year, I really liked this one your writing is ever evolving I will have a look at your last post I think there is another one I have missed

love Jayne-Chloe

loved

12 years 3 months ago

your greatness

milady,
poet of class
greatness

Frenchf

12 years 3 months ago

I looked at the map

And decided I am in the wrong country
Britian has Iceland on the left and the warm countries are below it heading towards Africa and the middle east. time to move!
Spring and sunshine were here today but you loved live in Haiti.... Hot hot hot
Or is that rubbish as well as you appear to be in minus 2