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Jun 26, 2021
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Springtime Haiku (Western) - June Contest
She is the springtime
A garden was given her
when a rose was sought
— Michael Anthony, Jun 26, 2021
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About This Poem
Last Few Words: Love the western form of haiku. My modest effort for the June contest.
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Polished draft
Critiques
Lavender
4 years 11 months ago
Springtime Haiku
Hello, Michael,
Your poetry is breathtaking - there are no words to describe the emotions this stirs. Beautiful.
Thank you!
L
Michael Anthony
4 years 11 months ago
Wow, thank you L! I always
Wow, thank you L! I always appreciate your visits, and glad you liked this one.
Cheers
Geezer
4 years 11 months ago
I like...
the inference that she would be happy for just the rose, but has been given much more.
Geez.
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Michael Anthony
4 years 11 months ago
Thanks Geez! Always an
Thanks Geez! Always an interesting challenge for me to say something worthwhile within the strict western form.
Cheers
Mike
Michael Anthony
4 years 11 months ago
Got it Mark, thanks! Cheers
Got it Mark, thanks!
Cheers
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