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Stainless lovers Year 2010

Stainless lovers

This poem was composed
after reading a poet's version
of self love
and
a state of idealism.

I do hope
it does justice
to the poetic love
one of idealism...

Stainless Love

I have no doubt
that you were sleeping
as those words rolled out
neither the sun had set,
nor were you dreaming.

Perhaps 'twas early morn by then,
Rise my friend
above the soiled sheets of pain,
love is the only beauty in life
that does never at all stain
even after all love has drenched
in rain

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 8 months ago

Steph,you are the kindest poet

I have come across .
I am an aged person
but my mind
works at the level
of the readers
who appreciate my worth

And you really
young lady are one such a one
I have come across many
about the Internet
on sites I deliver my sermons.
God Bless you lady,
if there be one. .

amen

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

7 years 8 months ago

I agree with Steph

To me, this is one of your best poetic outpourings ever. It says so much so succinctly and with such verve.

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 8 months ago

Kindness Keith

I was wondering why you now
don't come to read me

thank you very much
This was composed long ago
when I was yet
a novice
poet