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Sep 05, 2022
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A Star Forged
It was with the sarcastic gusto
Of her first words to him
That she became her own invitation
To the end of his contact list.
There she resided shining
Like a new born star
Amongst the ashes
Of burned out relationships.
The flotsam of friendships
Both false and forlorn
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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Jackweb
2 years 10 months ago
First impressions...!
First impressions matter, for good and bad. They are fine when you like someone on first meeting...
Thought brilliantly crafted from insight, Excellent!!!
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