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Jul 03, 2018
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Still To Go
There is a long way
still to go
I, like Walt Whitman,
have found power
in contemplating
a blade of grass
dew in the flower
a moth in lamplight
but the grass can only
grow so high
the dew only lasts
the morning
and a moth cannot
see the starlight
I must keep filling
my tank
with poetry
and reaching for
the most sublime
for there is a long way
still to go
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
gregwa8
7 years ago
definitely not doing it for
definitely not doing it for the money, lol. it helps keep my heart pumping though. thanks MarkL, for the kind words,
greg