still searching..

In search of you
a friend who once spoke
high of a golden world of poetry
and at the helm was I

where in the wilderness
have you amalgamated into thin air,
vanished!
why have you my friend from a poet's life banished,

where amongst the myriads of stars
shall I now find another friend?
my well wisher of your kind

return to me the smiles I gave
so that poetry flowed from my pathway
to lead a soul to greater glory,
come now, make life no more gory,
'tis a life time's venture I compose
and to the cauldrons of time
my mind’s creations I dispose..

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Frenchf

12 years 5 months ago

Who is not your friend

Any longer on neopoets ?

loved

12 years 5 months ago

you are good

you do humour------
ask some who addressme as
assssssssssss....
with a caps

Seren

12 years 5 months ago

Another commentary poem I can

Another commentary poem I can't see anything to fault
I'm sure your friend will return we all come and go as
Life permits

Heres hoping you see your friend sooner rather than later

Love Jc :)

loved

12 years 5 months ago

SO THOUGHTFUL and kind

glad you are back in form

Ian.T

12 years 4 months ago

Loved

We all have many things to do and your friends are still here, they read each day and sometimes your man made time runs out on them.
As you can see by my 00-00 Blog I am up late each night, that I don't comment doesn't mean that I haven't read your poetry, it is just having more hours would be a good thing lol.
Take care young Bard and keep writing, Yours as always Ian.T

loved

12 years 4 months ago

you lighten

my heart
how glad I am to know
you do....