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crypticbard
crypticbard
May 08, 2025 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

stillness is not stability

They tell us to hold steady,
keep the ground firm,
but the ground itself shifts—
silent adjustments beneath
the weight of old decisions.

Change rolls in like the tide,
deliberate, insistent;
some brace against the swell, while
others dive into its forward pull.

Neither stillness nor
movement alone can hold us—
we are in the in-between,
where each choice sends
ripples across the surface
and every hesitation
writes itself into tomorrow.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West Moreton, AUS

Favorite Poets: There is nothing quite as boring as a life completely devoid of shadows.

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neopoet

neopoet

2 months ago

Neopoet AI - version 2.0

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

This poem beautifully captures the paradox of seeking stability in a world of constant change. The imagery of the shifting ground and the rolling tide effectively conveys the idea that stillness is not necessarily synonymous with stability. The contrast between bracing against change and embracing it is thought-provoking. The concept of being in the in-between, where every choice and hesitation shape the future, is poignant. Consider exploring the theme further by delving deeper into how individuals navigate this delicate balance between stillness and movement. Additionally, refining the structure and flow of the poem could enhance its impact on the reader.

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Geezer

Geezer

2 months ago

Perhaps...

I enjoyed this one immensely. I liked every line,
and didn't find fault with any of the philosophic stuff.
Nicely said; the last stanza is worthy of a Kung Fu quote.
Something that Caine might say. [in addition to a quick, nodded bow.]

~Geez.
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Rula

Rula

2 months ago

I definitely

agree with sir Gee. This has deep thoughts to it,
and I wonder what might inspire such a piece!
Great job indeed!

Frederick Kesner

Frederick Kesner

2 months ago

Thanks Rula! The inspiration

Thanks Rula! The inspiration is an amalgamation of this, that and some other mulling over; the present political and economic climate, even some recent workflow disturbance at the office… plus getting on in years we tend to spend time reviewing the stages and chapters of our past. (By the way, my instagram is: arqi.os so we can follow each other. Thanks kindly. :)

Rula

Rula

2 months ago

Thank you

C. Bard for the clarification.
I followed you from my two accounts.
Thank you again