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The Stone ( Imagery Workshop-one line)

Pitiful mute rocks roll down silently.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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8 years ago

Not sure I've ever known rocks to roll silently but there IS a lot of imagery here

8 years ago

should have used stones instead of rocks. It works better I think?

8 years ago

I was told just one, but the verse is clear as gravity.

8 years ago

And, yes, a single stone is preferable

8 years ago

I thought tears worked slightly better than rocks in this.
It's funny isn't it, how we all describe the one thing so completely differently.
Jx