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Storytellers
All of my scars have a story.
Some I can easily touch. Others I can only feel
below the surface. Some speak of epic yarns
of stubbornness and foolishness.
The wounds I feared most were delivered
by the most talented knife of all, love and loss,
seemingly immune to bandages.
I learned to patch them up with time. In this way
when they open again, as they do, it will be gentle
and they’ll not make such a spectacle.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Time: An adversary and a friend.
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
mark
5 months 1 week ago
So true and relative
I think the title could not be more poetic, Micheal.
The theme seems common but the poetry you created makes it unique in poetry.
A pleaure,
Mark
Michael Anthony
5 months 1 week ago
Very kind Mark, thank you.
Very kind Mark, thank you.
Best
Ray Miller
5 months 1 week ago
Storytellers
Enjoyed the read. Not sure about "most talented knife", sharpest knife is the obvious, but maybe you want to avoid the obvious - no harm in that.
Michael Anthony
5 months 1 week ago
Thanks for stopping by Ray!
Thanks for stopping by Ray! Appreciate your comments.
Best
Rula
5 months 1 week ago
Hello Michael
you have absolutely hit a nail with this one.
Brilliant!
Michael Anthony
5 months 1 week ago
Thank you Rula!
Thank you Rula!
Best