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Dec 28, 2012
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strange dreams
I'm drifting to dream
Falling wounds opened tonight
Awake to sunshine
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
BlueDemon77
12 years 6 months ago
Interesting and economical
I must admit it means one thing or I have a dirty mind. Either way, Bravo to you :)
Ron
Seren
12 years 6 months ago
Ron
Lol it could mean lots of things given some thought .... Thanks for the read and comment much appreciated
Love Jc x
scribbler
12 years 6 months ago
Hello
Nice senryu. First line might be a bit better stated but then again that might just be me lol................stan
Seren
12 years 6 months ago
Stan
I will give it some thought see what I can come up with thanks for the read and comment
Regards Jc x
Ian.T
12 years 6 months ago
Jayne
A good picture, but those dreams I am sad that they are troubling, time to drag the sunshine into the evening time.
Suggest that some good music may rest the memory and change, the hurt felt to heart felt.
Easy to say, hard to do, but things one day will sort out their position in this realm, Yours Ian
PS:- cryptic, but I know you will understand, walk a while barefoot on the soil we are but a thought away.
Seren
12 years 6 months ago
Ian
I have good dreams floating round atm I will run barefoot tonight smiles ...this is hard to do on my phone lol
You have a great new year
Love always Jc xxx