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Streaming
Mowing the lawn
Something in the bottom of the little finger
Of the left hand glove
Keeps stinging like a bee
Turn it inside out and there’s nothing to see
What does this mean?
Not everything is message or metaphor
Nor each passing thought
A reliable or worthy prompt to put
Pen to paper
Fingers to keyboard
To see where it may lead
Nagging thoughts flood no matter
What’s the use of trying to shut them out
And how ridiculous
Anti-free thought and inspiration
Stifling of imagination
Would such a thought process be
So let it go
Don’t artificially try to interrupt the flow
Of whatever comes to mind
Time is always short
And even just sitting on the porch
May lead to a land not yet conceived
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
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1 month ago
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Lavender
1 month ago
Streaming
Hello, Richard,
I sense both the feeling that everything has meaning, no matter how simple, and that not everything needs to have a magnificent purpose, but is still significant in its way. I especially enjoyed the final stanza.
Thank you!
L
Richard Milne
1 month ago
Thanks Lavender
Your comments are always appreciated. Sweetness to you always...