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Jan 26, 2015
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STREWN
clockwork
decibels or power
transition
shadowplayers
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lenny of Cohen
10 years 5 months ago
Magikal.
Kind of esoteric(well to me). Nice.
Esker
10 years 5 months ago
thanks Lenny!
been on this case about wavelengths forever..
like a pressure syn wave..precursor
like there is more to time then just the measure
in a clock or atom...
awareness...
theres time...
a song...a memory
and we do it for each other
flip that back and forth
I love the word zaps
that intel spark
to jive the synapse
clockwork...
cosmic!
Sparrow
10 years 5 months ago
Steve
This took me back a few years in memory, there was a shadow boxer that use to practice his skills, we use to pass where he practiced on the school bus (shows how long ago that was lol).
This one just brought the memory back.
I should really look at it to see what you had written about but memory got n the way,
Take care out there and be wary of those storms,
Yours Ian
Esker
10 years 5 months ago
Measure and beat and step..
intuition...its in us.
Thanks