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Juin Deveraux
Juin Deveraux
Jan 26, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Stubborn Heart

Sometimes when my stubborn heart gets a little blue
I take her away from everything about you
I pour her a drink and take her in my arms
where her tears can roll free, away from judgement or harm

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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mand

mand

14 years 5 months ago

Hi Juin

I like this clever poem. I love the third line - I think I'll do that for my heart, sounds like good therapy.

Excellent

Love Mand xxxxxx

S

scribbler

14 years 5 months ago

heart

I think this is your 1st posting here.Welcome to the site.I always marvel at the way some writers can pack so much into so few words.Looking forward to more of your writing.............scribbler