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Subjectivity

‎"The beauty of subjectivity
Is everybody gains.
It makes the bars of captivity
Decorated window panes.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I had a program recently with a group of writers. It was called "Writer's Block Unlocked." I tried to write a poem in response to a poem prompt. I failed. This is all I could come up with.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ghana, GHA

Favorite Poets: William Shakespeare, Lord Byron, John Keats, Percy Shelley, Oscar Wilde, Alfred Lord Tennyson, Henry Longfellow, William Yates, Ezra Pound, Sylvia Plath

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

13 years 4 months ago

I would love...

to see this expanded upon. It stands well on the few lines that you have written, but you could do well to think about how those decorated window panes might affect someone looking at or through them. ~ Gee

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

13 years 4 months ago

Perfect!!

I fuck'en love this, how simple and thought provoking. Damnnnn!

Eddie

William Saint George

William Saint George

13 years 3 months ago

Thanks Eddie. U're very

Thanks Eddie. U're very welcome. Didn't have much time to reply earlier.

Short poems work well for me, especially when they neatly bottle up everything that's to be said. :D