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lovedly
lovedly
Jan 07, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Substitute Quickly ------edit still

Second hand
man woman
hubby or wife
all need a replacement early

a car
a cart
Audi
or
Cadilac

even a micro and drier
when all pack
the only answer is
to just em sack...

buy afresh
or
change
with your purse

cut your cloth
with new scissors
according to its worth
then
then
lay down flat ...
buttons open

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Change when its a must

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

Geezer

Geezer

2 years 6 months ago

After...

replacing two wives, I find that the one I have now is quite enough to keep me going.
I don't think I could keep up with a newer model, besides who wants to train another one?
~ Geez.
.,

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 6 months ago

Ha ha Gee

while just composing this I did not at all have u in my mind I knew all
thnx friend

Lavender

Lavender

2 years 6 months ago

Substitute...

carefully, to be sure - if at all. I'm determined to live with less "stuff."
Nice, Lovedly!
L

Rosewood Apothecary

Rosewood Apothecary

2 years 6 months ago

Upgrades

Lol. I use it until it’s broken beyond repair. I buy new things of course. My cheaper imported guitars record as many songs as the pricey American ones. Our fancy coffee machine was hundreds of dollars and it pooped out in a few years. The old crusty one it replaced has regained its former heavyweight title.

Tim

Seren

Seren

2 years 6 months ago

Dear Loved

This really needs some work hon; it needs to have the ha-ha & lol removed at the end you know Jess would savage you for that ;) maybe?

cut your cloth
with new scissors
according to its worth
then laydown (or something) with a laugh

I used laydown as an example as always this is your poem, I want it to be YOU though!

love and biggest hugs J xxx

Seren

Seren

2 years 6 months ago

Now & Always

I actually like what you've done ;)

the ha-ha & lol took away from it Imo,

I'll see you tomorrow loved

Love and biggest hugs J xxx