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The Sun Bled Crimson Red--updated

THE SUN BLED CRIMSON RED

The sun bled crimson red
into the western seas
and fire blazed in the darkening skies
piercing wakes of fading sunlight
as the moon yellow pale broke the night.
icy Nordic waves rode on wings of fury
and the trees like skeletons danced
on gallows in the wind.
the fields lay fallow
the earth barren and still
and the noise of all living things
died in thuds of silence.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Life is constant movement, change and flux. Too bad I have motion sickness.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: USA

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Geezer

Geezer

13 years 7 months ago

I like the...

words you used and the way you used them! A frightening look at the end of the world. But...
the last line just came out of nowhere, and didn't seem to relate to the rest of the poem. I wish you would expound a little more on that aspect, let the reader in on why you say that. ~ Gee