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Jul 31, 2023
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Sunday
On Sundays, let the dreamers take control
Coffee, books, and hooded sweaters, role
Naps to restore, snacks to nourish each soul
Messy buns and glasses, enter the day with a goal
Let imaginations run wild, and dreams unfold
To explore, discover, to be ten times bold
A happy, blissful peace unlike no other day
Conspired by the Lord above, with fortune and fate to play
Sacrifice sleep today, time last forever
Though Sunday hastens away, bear the bliss together
For this day I wish none ever find end
But in memories, remain close to our hearts and minds
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Kristen H.
1 year 10 months ago
Love!
I love this one!! Great write!