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Sep 29, 2022
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SUNDAY Those out there should review
An autumn leaf
be not alone
all are lonely
somewhere in the vastness
of eternity
someone calls out suddenly
still we say wait
time hasn't come yet
loneliness vanishes
unknown come in one’s dreams
screams
where have you been
one says
are you asking
a strewn autumn leaf
invisible one smiles
alongside
now 'tis autumn
there is no surprise
hope you too will be
some day
flying about
side beside
till then in my mind
reside
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Have you ever observed in dreams dead never speak yet they convey Slowly silently hear me
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
2 years 9 months ago
Dreams
I don’t remember many of my dreams. I do find this one particularly interesting. People passing away like leaves falling brushing past each other. Dreams dissipating into consciousness as we wake up like trees into bare winter. I like it.
Tim
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
Thanks TIM
Next dream make it a point to try and speak with a now dead one
But you are so lucky so it seems
you never recall dreams
ONE in 7.5 billion
can't believe
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
thanks Ray
for tye good words
all pray
scribbler
2 years 9 months ago
Hi loved
One of the best poems I've read in a while
lovedly
2 years 9 months ago
oooooooooooooooooooo
scribbler STAN
so sweet of
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glad for you