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Jul 01, 2019
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Sunlight Like Crystals
garden paradise
swan lake
shimmering sunlight
like crystals
on the watery surface...
turtles at the waters edge
swans hiding beneath underbrush
stork nearby
middle of the lake...
kids play at the play ground
parents nearby
watching over their children
birds call
mating in midair...
butterflies flutter
yellow jackets
black and yellow bumblebees
sip nectar from flowers surface...
showers of light like stars
pulled me
spiraling in the wind
as the sunsets...
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
2 years 6 months ago
another worthy poetess of neo
unread poem composed three years ago
now go read what she had to say
good poetess
Candlewitch
2 years 6 months ago
hello dear Lady!
it is wonderful to see you again! your lovely poem is a Yule gift of magical thoughts transferred through delicate words. my favorites are:
showers of light like stars
pulled me
spiraling in the wind
as the sunsets...
go in grace, love, Cat