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Sunrises Eternally

I saw this sunrise once before
I am seeing it again and again
such a lovely sun
we have all
what life does it contain
without it no life can we sustain

Alas the sunsets
off and again
but never ever in vain
as it rises again and again

Come see the sunrise with me
as in the mornings
we love each other
to be a rising sun
as such a one

So heavens
and my mind
help me
for mankind an
everlasting sun
may I forever be

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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lovedly

lovedly

4 years 10 months ago

You are the Sun of tomorrow Sir,

So I must follow you
from today this very moment
do pray
Many find poetry out of array
but I hope all will read
you and me
some day
if not today
one day
but then it will be
the suniest day
we both must our poetry '
display
I will you may