Sun's Vibe

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The imagery in your poem "Sun's Vibe" is vivid and evocative, creating a sensory experience for the reader. However, there are a few areas where clarity could be improved. The use of punctuation, such as commas and periods, could help guide the reader through the flow of the poem. Additionally, some words like "chemist" and "pettle" may benefit from further clarification or context to enhance the overall understanding of the piece. Consider refining these elements to strengthen the impact of your poem.

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about what you mean with the line: "A splashed orange juiced hug on a chemist."
I have the vision of a splash of orange juice; being the same color as the sun; do you mean the feeling of a splash of orange juice, hugging the "chemist", whoever he may be?

I think you should modify the text to keep the lines making sense.
I would rearrange them to look like this:

A splashed orange juiced hug on a chemist.
Of patchwork flowers, showing off their summer coats,
while pouring out their potpourri of sexy perfume.
Each warm finger, turning buckets of light, to energy.
Huddled petal lips blowing out a tank of oxygen.

I get the feeling in general, of a sunny day,
with bright flowers and sunshine, the scent of flowers everywhere,
and the magic of plants turning sun and energy to oxygen. [A simplistic view, of course].
A little work and this is so nice!
~ Geezer.
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Ok, I get it now. Yeah, the reference is a bit obtuse, but I certainly see it as explained. Now that I'm thinking in that vein, it all makes sense. ~ Geez.
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