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Clentin
Clentin
Feb 20, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sunshine

Clouds move by too fast
Exposing light and brightness
Creating warmth below

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Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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Seren

Seren

2 years 4 months ago

Dear Clentin

Another cracking three-line poem, I am so taken with this one I see the clouds moving past and the suns heat warming my face in those minuscule moments. Here in Australia in the summer the heat is there clouds or no. but in the winter, this is the how it is where I live which is classed as sub-tropical.

At the moment its 11pm and the heat is incredible tonight.

I went totally off topic I apologise your poem took me away.

Kindest Regards Seren

Clentin

Clentin

2 years 4 months ago

Thank you. I am trying to

Thank you. I am trying to write a haiku or similar poems with different ideas, nature as well as other
Types of feeling.

Candlewitch

Candlewitch

2 years 4 months ago

der Clentin,

nicely done! btw, did you get the p.m. I sent you yesterday? I hope it helped you.

*hugs, Cat