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Surveillance Status:

Some persons and a few nations
Borderline insecurity
Proscriptions and persecutions
Removal of immunity

Illegal invasions war crimes
Tipping point duly approaching
Criminal court proceeding times
Due just punishment processing

Current balance unworkable
Time for graceful abdication
Need for leadership reshuffle
Regional borders revision

Absence of the source aggression
Resulting in stability
Logical common progression
Peaceful regional unity

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore, Shakespeare among many more

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Geezer

Geezer

7 years 1 month ago

As per usual...

you have stated political views widely held and done it with style. ~ Geezer.
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OriginalRhyku

7 years 1 month ago

Geezer,

Thank you for your kind words and I am gratified to be one among many in the widely held opinions.

Although what perplexes me is that if the views are widely held, then the oligarchy is holding the reins on the status quo without the public majority consent or even the status of a quorum.

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OriginalRhyku

7 years 1 month ago

Geezer,

Thank you for your kind words and I am gratified to be one among many in the widely held opinions.

Although what perplexes me is that if the views are widely held, then the oligarchy is holding the reins on the status quo without the public majority consent or even the status of a quorum.