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Jun 05, 2016
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SUSTENANCE
SUSTENANCE
what pure and generous hearts
I have met on the way.
what kindness and compassion
have struck my soul
to the near ecstasy of being.
what tears I have shed for already
missing you.
I wrap myself in the warmth of
your thoughts and the music of your
words that soothe and sustain.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
jane210660
9 years 1 month ago
We are still here,
We are still here,
we are still here
and listening to you. Jxx
China Blue
9 years 1 month ago
Joe
I see you are holding on this is tres bien mon ami
your gratitude is obvious but the sadness is what is prevalent
alidzain
9 years 1 month ago
yep
I'm still here. Another good one filled with emotion. Be strong.
Alid
AMOGELANG MOKOBANE
9 years 1 month ago
Nice poem seems to have a lot
Nice poem seems to have a lot of depth of soul in of it
lovedly
9 years 1 month ago
your personal experience... surpasses
all shadows of emotion
your words leave
the readers mouth agape
wow what did Joe
just say!!!
a layer of sadness
en-clothed in spiritual sorrow
appear it may....
Geremia
9 years 1 month ago
Joe is very ill and thanks
Joe is very ill and thanks you all very much. Hopefully ,he will be able to answer all comments himself. Give him time. We are all concerned, but knowing Joe, he will soon be back .
Richard
lovedly
9 years 1 month ago
God Bless him and you
Richards
for befriending him so much
may he get better soon
wish him well in his ear
at times we are far
but feel we are near