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Mar 21, 2016
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SWEEP STAKES (Acrostic)
S hades of blue and grey
W atch clouds above at play
E ach swaying in delight
E nacting a chore in sunlight
P aused when dusk makes way for night
S tars slowly made their way
T winkling merrily and gay
A wesome display dazzling the sky
K indling the gazers with a sigh
E nding their chore with a shooting star
S ilently bowing with a blush at dawn
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
9 years 3 months ago
this is a delightful
acrostic dear raj. Like the title too!!
raj
9 years 3 months ago
Hi Rula
Thanks for the read. Good to know you liked my maiden attempt at Acrostic :)
Regards,
lovedly
9 years 3 months ago
great acrostic
it all hearts
sweeps