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lovedly
lovedly
Dec 12, 2021 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

SWEET BLOODED ME

All run after me
my knees
are now
extremely weak

let me fall and bleed
they'll suck it

my blood is too sweet

About This Poem

Last Few Words: As life ebbs body curls

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Geezer

Geezer

3 years 7 months ago

Are you feeling...

as though you are being stalked? Do you feel like you have run as far as you can with your poetry? That people are running you down to suck the life's blood of your work from you? We all feel that way sometimes. You are still pertinent, don't worry, be happy! Geez.
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Jackweb

Jackweb

3 years 7 months ago

I'm torchlighing this verse

I think I need a chisel to break it apart. LoL!
Very apt and highly condensed.

"my blood is too sweet" that's a terrific imagery.