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Dec 11, 2020
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The sweet stream of Silence
I sit and stare
wondering
where is a place
I can hide my face.
away from the whole
human race .
Drifting into
outer space.
Just swarmed
by the
sweet serene
sound of silence.
Never to be found
and broken by
the vile
vulgar sounds
of violence.
And through the years
as time
tiptoes past
the tears.
All thoughts
forgets the fears.
When the end
of my age
draws near.
Im still smiling
ear to ear.
As I trip
and trot
down
the time
forgotten
trail towards
tranquility.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
4 years 7 months ago
Everlasting peace...
something that many of us wish for and never achieve. Nice wishing and I hope that you manage some measure of it. My only crit. is [passed] should be [past]. ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Thank you
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Thank you for your kind words
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
this is a very beautiful but negative piece of poemy
can you endeavor composing
despite ur medical condition
something positive
I'm sure 'twill be a masterpiece
just try kiddy
Edward nigma
4 years 7 months ago
Thank you
Okay but I’m inspired by music I was inspired to write this one from the song life line from Harry Nilsson
lovedly
4 years 7 months ago
ok
be master of yourself
some of my poems have been musified
can you find one