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mand
mand
Apr 29, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Sweeten If Desired

How to make
peppermint tea?
it's easy!
Pick, wash, rinse and tear
two or three
fresh mint leaves.
Place 'em in
a teacup
add boiling water,
steep for five minutes.
Serve it up
hot or cold
with a wake me up slice
of lemon and ice.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

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Country/Region: GBR

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raj

7 years 1 month ago

Hi Mand

loved the sip of your recipe :)

Looking forward to read more from you..

Cheers!

mand

mand

7 years 1 month ago

Thanks Raj! :)

Just started trying to get back into it. :) Glad you liked it - apparently Moroccan peppermint tea is delicious,

"The Moroccan teapot, or berrad, is not only beautiful, but the perfect shape for delivering the long pour you’ll need for your tea. Moroccan tea glasses are generally small, handleless, and often colourful.

https://honestlyyum.com/10328/moroccan-mint-tea/

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valene

7 years 1 month ago

must've been a herbal teA, LOL.

FUCK, WHY AM I NOW IN CAPITALS QUESTION MARK. oh, that's good....
....like this array of words of yours.
good to READ summit worth the while.

eph xx

mand

mand

7 years 1 month ago

Hellooooo Valene!

I hope all is well with you! Will try and pop by to read some of your gems ( a.s.a.p )

Thanks for taking the time to READ and make a comment! Muchly appreciated :) Keep safe!

LOve Mand xxxxx :)

mand

mand

7 years 1 month ago

Lol

All the gospels an all indeed! xxxx

Rula

Rula

7 years 1 month ago

I'll be up there

with you dear ... how great to read you again Mandy dear.
Hope all is well. I have accepted the invitation as I said previously.
Sweet just like you!

mand

mand

7 years 1 month ago

Helllooooo Rula :)

:) - A refreshing iced peppermint tea, in good company, couldn't ask for anything more! :)

One of these days!

Love to you and yours

Mand xxxxx

Sparrow

Sparrow

6 years 10 months ago

Mand

A great recipe, good to see you are still writing.
Hope everything is well with you and yours.
Drop us a line some day.. Yours Ian . T