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Neopoem Of The Week Contest September 11th to September 17 2022
symphonic burdens
don’t pity the poor fool who walks with shackles.
don’t smile at the clown who holds candles in his hands
crying as the wax burns flesh.
don’t laugh with the drunk who cries into a glass of gin.
refuse your love to the loveless
take what you have been given and swallow it whole
pray you feel the red wine drip from the sides of your mouth
coat your lips with sticky sticky red,
taste it for years to come.
drink up as you are told
keep your body steady as you fall,
fall,
fall.
Sing yourself a symphony
With a choir of hatred and desire
selfishness and need
Hold your head high while you
drink your bottled love and cry with no voice.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Killer Bee
2 years 9 months ago
Ooooo
I like this piece, the kinda piece I sit back and re-read and read once more. My favourite bit has to be 'Sing yourself a symphony
With a choir of hatred and desire
selfishness and need'
There's something beautiful but haunting in these words.