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May 30, 2012
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t o r r e n t i a l i t y
ruse it clever baby
fuse it with your cleaver
the hard candy receiver
drenched in your fear and sweet sweat
wet slather and yes
I would rather
Pump it Pump it
Nitro scene
the fabric crawls
its taut obscene
the broken glass
like glitter death
expound the drones
and fuck the mess
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 1 month ago
synchronicity.
This poem struck a strong chord with some stuff happening in my life at the moment.
Brother, we do share a deep connection across geography and culture.
Thanks for this, I feel less alone, perhaps that ability is one of the highest aspirations of poetry.