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Jul 16, 2013
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T V O T K
The Valley of the Kings; sleeps
Below the moons blind eye
Within its mask of stars
Stone steps decend
Beneath the sandstorm
Amist the tide of centuries
Temple carvings beckon the night
And dance between
Twilights grasp
Swirling ocean of sand
Unfurls its innumeral golden veil
Sheathing and unsheathing
The Valley of the Kings
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - draft
Comments
Race_9togo
11 years 12 months ago
Poem is good,
Had to think about the title. Not bad.
I don't really have a criticism. This is timeless and evocative.
I like a lot.
Keep writing.
loved
11 years 12 months ago
I have to think
only if you had read me
distinct
Roscoe Lane
11 years 12 months ago
I like this,
I like this, and get a very distinct picture as i read. Regards Roscoe...
Ian.T
11 years 12 months ago
Club
TVOTK's I saw the bones of the Valley but lost the feelings that should go with this ancient place where everything would have happened from birth to death in many ways.
Just me but would have loved more feelings in there,
Yours Ian.T
Seren
11 years 12 months ago
Ello ello
Nice to see you around again, I really loved the poem I can find nothing to crit
always a pleasure to read your poetry
love JC xxx
club special
11 years 11 months ago
Thanx
High praise for my stuff, thanx
More to come...