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Apr 08, 2020
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Taught by my own pen
<p>A patient of uncertainty, laying on my sickbed admiring vanity, the ugly beauty of being alive. The freedom of survival, an example of the birds in the sky Lost in my thoughts, i pick a friend whose blood is louder than my voice, A pen.
Magic, as it brings my thoughts alive, playing out a reality of choice.
After spilling blood on the lines, words come alive, i sit back and learn, the process of being taught by my pen. LIMAN</p>
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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c lynn brooks
5 years 5 months ago
ushman
It was dificult to read wriiten as it s
also more so difficult to understand