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lovedly
lovedly
Apr 26, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tears alone well

Tears do well

Tears or a tear

Raises emotions
in yes, don't fear
in any human

A PM like Churchill
the solidest man
in the ''Dark Hour''
had a tear well up

I think the word
tear does 'well'
does well...
and
it glimmers like a diamond...
reminds one of the diamond ring
in the solar eclipse
if you have seen
don't mind my ellipse....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 2 months ago

Tears and diamonds...

Tears and diamonds...
Thank you for posting your sparkling write.
It was a pleasure to read.
I liked the use of the word eclipse.
It addad a lot to the shine.

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

wow o Irene friend

Now
I believe in telepathy
just a second ago
I posted a comment on Raj's Sunku
In respect of friendly creative you
Irene
Dobridenh

T

tyro

7 years 2 months ago

what a lovedly poem.

Hi Lovedly, what a lovedly poem. I love its playfulness with the word well, something I can appreciate very well..

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

all thy inspiration

tyro O one
and
only you spring well
in unique poetry
let tears also in gratitude
our eyes well
'twill be swell
poetry does ring the bell....

R

raj

7 years 2 months ago

inspired by your theme Lovedly

Tears do well
from emotional depths
may shine as crystals
or die an instant death
even add to the canvas
a human touch

from where they come
when and how
even if I know
they still will jerk
in moments of
sheer overwhelment
shed in black or white
.............................................

lovedly

lovedly

7 years 2 months ago

and dear Raj_sublime

'''''they still will jerk+++++++++++++
what a manly connotatiion
as you swell
hope soonly all be well

now sunku it raj _sublime
squeeze it
like LIME.......